. Although I must warn you that we barely completed the chat pad notebook that we had and the ones online are just like two scenes or something. Anyway
, for those who are aware that I have been
a fan fiction about the original character (OC) I created for the said chat pad, well, you still have your chance to close the window. haha.
So, I have indeed written a fan fiction about her and it was horrible
. Due to my, erm, fan girl-ishness a few weeks before the release of Harry Potter and the Half-blood Prince, I decided to re-read the fic, and I must say, my eyes hurt
. Haha. So freaking cheesy and so...loose. No story whatsoever. Haha. (In my defense, I just want to say that what I posted was not proofread. Not that that
make any difference whatsoever.) So I revised it. And well, if you want to read it, well, go ahead.
I must warn you, though, this is longer than the original (which I pray you wouldn't search any longer, this is shameful enough for me, thank you very much). Also, somethings may not be clear (although I honestly tried to clear everything in the story) but please bear with me. I am planning on writing three more, erm, stories about her to finish her story: one on her sixth year, another for her seventh and finally, for her post-DH life. I have it all in my head, but I have yet to encode them. *smiles innocently* So if you want to put up with my fan girlness, I'd be happy to accommodate you in my crazy world. Okay, another, erm, warning. My grammar is not very brilliant as I hoped it to be. Haha. So for grammar mistakes, please deduct .5 from the final score and let me see how I'll pay you for my debt, okay? The pairing would be Draco Malfoy and my OC. If you have any objections, please send flames, hate mails and the likes to me
. Okay, as for the rating or something like that, I don't think it's necessary considering we're all adults here and nothing fun
happens on this year. I'm reserving those torture moments (for my brain and Xandra) for sixth year and post-DH.
One last thing before I give you the fic, please do comment. Please? Even if to just say that the fic was horrible and my writing wasn't good? Please? You can either comment here in LJ or in Multiply, I wouldn't mind. Just please? Be kind enough to drop a comment? Thanks!Click here!
Okay, that was just, uhm, about half of the story. I need comments! hahaha. I have it in my flash drive but I think I'll just keep it for a while. At least until I get, erm, reviews? haha. Besides, it is too long, you won't be able to finish it either. haha. So please comment? I'll post the other half in two days. *smiles*EDIT: (20 August 2009)
Here's the sort of second thirds? Haha. Click me!
There are only eight pages left. But I think I'll hold off until probably Monday next week. See if my threat to not updating would take effect or something. But I highly doubt it. Will post on Monday, nonetheless. *hugs* EDIT: (24 August 2009)This is the final installment for the fifth year.
Go ahead and click or whatever.Comments are love but if you don't want to leave one, it's fine. I hope you enjoy reading it, though, as much as I enjoyed writing it.
My friends and I started writing in our chat pad, a sort-of role playing Harry Potter fan fiction kind of thing. If you want to, erm, learn more, please visit